Posts : 11 Join date : 2011-06-22 Age : 30 Location : Invading your "vital regions"!
Subject: Our First Song Sun Oct 30, 2011 2:18 am
Our first song is going to be Butterfly on Your Right Shoulder in English! Yay!
Here are what the lyrics currently look like based solely on Len's version of the song:
Your right shoulder had a purple butterfly The corner of the room is where we used to kiss I learned what it's like to have a broken heart A piano echoes, trapped inside my head
Whoa~ oh~ Ah~
Your right shoulder had a purple butterfly The corner of the room is where we used to kiss I learned what it's like to have a broken heart A piano echoes, trapped inside my head
Hurry and wake me up right now because I'm having another nightmare Beginnings are really only just trivial things, isn't that right? Don't ask me if I feel good because I won't give you an answer The beautiful night dazzled me and now I've completely lost my way Doing all I can, making my eyelashes long Wearing eyeliner and make my lips shine
Your right shoulder had a purple butterfly The corner of the room is where we used to kiss I learned what it's like to have a broken heart A piano echoes, trapped inside my head
I stood out there in the rain and my hair looked like it was frozen My loneliness went down the drain while I was shivering and waiting for you I chase then run away, because I want you to follow me too If you think that I'm kidding around, you'll just end up hurt, understood? Painting my nails red and wearing a cheap ring Every time I get hurt, I get new earrings
Snuggle me, I have a black hole inside of me You're the only one who can make it disappear Aren't you the one? You know that you are I can't control myself anymore
I want to die from all of my regrets Which do I have more of, self-pity or pleasure? Make it all stop now or I'll end up going crazy Oh, please just kill me right now
What dripped from the wound is love, or ah~
I want to die from all of my regrets Which do I have more of, self-pity or pleasure? Make it all stop now or I'll end up going crazy Oh, please just kill me right now
Snuggle me, I have a black hole inside of me You're the only one who can make it disappear Aren't you the one? You know that you are I can't control myself anymore
Your right shoulder had a purple butterfly The corner of the room is where we used to kiss I learned what it's like to have a broken heart A piano echoes, trapped inside my head
Your right shoulder had a purple butterfly The corner of the room is where we used to kiss I learned what it's like to have a broken heart A piano echoes, trapped inside my head
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I'd like help with scripting, so please tell me if you'd like to help. Also, inform me if you will or will not be participating.
Mitsuru
Posts : 5 Join date : 2011-10-23
Subject: Re: Our First Song Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:44 pm
Umm... I had no idea we were an eng/jap chorus...
I don't sing in English...D: plus without hearing the song sung in English timing might be wrong so..
Nocturnal
Posts : 32 Join date : 2011-10-22 Age : 28 Location : The back of your closet! o.O
Subject: Re: Our First Song Sun Oct 30, 2011 4:37 pm
I have some lyrics I made if you want to see them let me know!
Yutaka
Posts : 15 Join date : 2011-10-22 Age : 28 Location : インドネシア
Subject: Re: Our First Song Sun Oct 30, 2011 6:52 pm
err can I have the link of the song in English please? ;;
Sai
Posts : 37 Join date : 2011-10-15
Subject: Re: Our First Song Sun Oct 30, 2011 10:09 pm
I know Razzyness has pretty amazing lyrics for this song if you want to use them
KuroHana1313
Posts : 8 Join date : 2011-10-22
Subject: Re: Our First Song Mon Oct 31, 2011 7:05 am
I don't usually sing in English, so can I have a link of this version? ^^" I'll probably get the timing wrong.
Kioshi Admin
Posts : 11 Join date : 2011-06-22 Age : 30 Location : Invading your "vital regions"!
Subject: Re: Our First Song Mon Oct 31, 2011 7:18 am
Could you do a cover with your lyrics? Just so I can see how they fit
Yeah I will I am going to post on AudioSpectrumChorus later after I mix.
All right. I'll be looking forward to it!
Riruka-chan~!
Posts : 7 Join date : 2011-11-06 Age : 25
Subject: Re: Our First Song Sun Nov 06, 2011 5:41 pm
Are we singing in english? I'm a whole lot better at singing in Japanese D: but it's okay if we are...
Sai
Posts : 37 Join date : 2011-10-15
Subject: Re: Our First Song Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:17 pm
Riruka-chan~! wrote:
Are we singing in english? I'm a whole lot better at singing in Japanese D: but it's okay if we are...
Yes were singing in English sorry :/
KyoriTsuki
Posts : 7 Join date : 2011-11-07
Subject: Oh Man..... Mon Nov 07, 2011 10:12 pm
So we have to sing the WHOLE thing? Goodness gracious......
• w •
Posts : 27 Join date : 2011-11-06 Location : London, UK
Subject: Re: Our First Song Tue Nov 08, 2011 2:48 pm
I am not the best at singing in English either. ; A ;
And I am always critical when it comes to English lyrics of a japanese song, because they never flow nicely to me.
I wrote these possible lyrics:
Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched, Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight, Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two, Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.
Won't you pretend you care for a while? It'll help me sleep easy, in nights where I am stressed. First impressions may seem to make a mark, but love at first sight never seems to find me. Don't you ask me where I feel good, though I may be intrigued, you won't get the answer you want. Only one night was all that it took, to leave me in an insane state of panic.
But lets overlook that, and put on my coloured eyeliner, And with my glossed lips, I'll take your breath away~!
Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched, Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight, Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two, Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.
Every year the cold seasons make me blue, when I'm standing outside just waiting for you, And the rain made my hair wet and cold, the good money I spent going down the drain. All this time that I have spent chasing you, when I should be the one being chased around by you, I'm not joking, it seems a bit unfair. If you found that bit funny, you can go to hell!
Cover my nails a new coat of blood-red nail varnish, And when my heart is broken, by a brand new ring.
Come and embrace me, I feel hollow inside. You're the only one that knows just how to make me smile, Seems so childish, but I think that you're the one, My prince charming? But that's so stupid!!
I could just die, from the way that I feel, But I can't decide which I like more, self-pity or making love? Oh! I can't take much more, I'm begging on my knees, If you love me so, then won't you kill me please?!
I have a gaping wound and only love will fill it, The love is leaking though, or maybe it's just---!
I could just die, from the way that I feel, But I can't decide which I like more, self-pity or making love? Oh! I can't take much more, I'm begging on my knees, If you love me so, then won't you kill me please?!
Come and embrace me, I feel hollow inside. You're the only one that knows just how to make me smile, Seems so childish, but I think that you're the one, My prince charming? But that's so stupid!!
Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched, Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight, Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two, Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.
Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched, Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight, Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two, Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.
---Just a suggestion.
I can do an example cover, if it will help.
Kioshi Admin
Posts : 11 Join date : 2011-06-22 Age : 30 Location : Invading your "vital regions"!
Subject: Re: Our First Song Tue Nov 08, 2011 5:59 pm
KyoriTsuki wrote:
So we have to sing the WHOLE thing? Goodness gracious......
The song will be scripted once we figure out which lyrics everyone likes the best. I'll put a poll up once I hear Nocturnal's and • w •'s versions of the song.
• w • wrote:
I am not the best at singing in English either. ; A ;
And I am always critical when it comes to English lyrics of a japanese song, because they never flow nicely to me.
I wrote these possible lyrics:
Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched, Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight, Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two, Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.
Won't you pretend you care for a while? It'll help me sleep easy, in nights where I am stressed. First impressions may seem to make a mark, but love at first sight never seems to find me. Don't you ask me where I feel good, though I may be intrigued, you won't get the answer you want. Only one night was all that it took, to leave me in an insane state of panic.
But lets overlook that, and put on my coloured eyeliner, And with my glossed lips, I'll take your breath away~!
Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched, Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight, Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two, Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.
Every year the cold seasons make me blue, when I'm standing outside just waiting for you, And the rain made my hair wet and cold, the good money I spent going down the drain. All this time that I have spent chasing you, when I should be the one being chased around by you, I'm not joking, it seems a bit unfair. If you found that bit funny, you can go to hell!
Cover my nails a new coat of blood-red nail varnish, And when my heart is broken, by a brand new ring.
Come and embrace me, I feel hollow inside. You're the only one that knows just how to make me smile, Seems so childish, but I think that you're the one, My prince charming? But that's so stupid!!
I could just die, from the way that I feel, But I can't decide which I like more, self-pity or making love? Oh! I can't take much more, I'm begging on my knees, If you love me so, then won't you kill me please?!
I have a gaping wound and only love will fill it, The love is leaking though, or maybe it's just---!
I could just die, from the way that I feel, But I can't decide which I like more, self-pity or making love? Oh! I can't take much more, I'm begging on my knees, If you love me so, then won't you kill me please?!
Come and embrace me, I feel hollow inside. You're the only one that knows just how to make me smile, Seems so childish, but I think that you're the one, My prince charming? But that's so stupid!!
Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched, Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight, Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two, Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.
Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched, Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight, Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two, Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.
---Just a suggestion.
I can do an example cover, if it will help.
That would help a lot
Luka(Lulu)
Posts : 1 Join date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: Our First Song Tue Nov 15, 2011 7:08 pm
Sorry, is this still open? Cause I'd like to participate... lol, I dun check forums a lot, i'm sorry
Kaoru0423Akashi
Posts : 5 Join date : 2011-10-22
Subject: Re: Our First Song Wed Nov 16, 2011 7:44 pm
Uh =A= I...don't really sing in English ;_; I might have to sit out of this chorus if it's gonna be in English ._.
Aerify
Posts : 31 Join date : 2011-10-22 Age : 31 Location : Under your bed.
Subject: Re: Our First Song Wed Nov 16, 2011 11:44 pm
I'll do this. However, I notice alot of the members are having issues with timing... Also, the part that is remixed (Ha-ha-haruki nante), where does that fit in on the English words? I can help with Scripting if needed, and I see... I might have to Genderbend for this one..
Aerify
Posts : 31 Join date : 2011-10-22 Age : 31 Location : Under your bed.
Subject: Re: Our First Song Thu Nov 17, 2011 8:32 pm
Also, I've got some ideas for this. So we all sound blended, maybe one record their vocals, and someone uses their vocals to sing with, and so that way everyone has a guide to sing with, since the english lyrics are a little harder to sing then the Japanese one.
Kai
Posts : 12 Join date : 2011-10-23 Age : 29
Subject: Re: Our First Song Thu Nov 17, 2011 9:22 pm
I'll participate *is probably late a @#$k *
Sai
Posts : 37 Join date : 2011-10-15
Subject: Re: Our First Song Thu Nov 17, 2011 11:07 pm
I want to participate (if it wasn't clear) :0
• w •
Posts : 27 Join date : 2011-11-06 Location : London, UK
Subject: Re: Our First Song Sat Nov 19, 2011 3:28 pm
Kaoru0423Akashi wrote:
Uh =A= I...don't really sing in English ;_; I might have to sit out of this chorus if it's gonna be in English ._.