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PostSubject: Our First Song   Sun Oct 30, 2011 2:18 am

Our first song is going to be Butterfly on Your Right Shoulder in English! Yay! Very Happy




Here are what the lyrics currently look like based solely on Len's version of the song:

Your right shoulder had a purple butterfly
The corner of the room is where we used to kiss
I learned what it's like to have a broken heart
A piano echoes, trapped inside my head

Whoa~ oh~ Ah~

Your right shoulder had a purple butterfly
The corner of the room is where we used to kiss
I learned what it's like to have a broken heart
A piano echoes, trapped inside my head

Hurry and wake me up right now because I'm having another nightmare
Beginnings are really only just trivial things, isn't that right?
Don't ask me if I feel good because I won't give you an answer
The beautiful night dazzled me and now I've completely lost my way
Doing all I can, making my eyelashes long
Wearing eyeliner and make my lips shine

Your right shoulder had a purple butterfly
The corner of the room is where we used to kiss
I learned what it's like to have a broken heart
A piano echoes, trapped inside my head

I stood out there in the rain and my hair looked like it was frozen
My loneliness went down the drain while I was shivering and waiting for you
I chase then run away, because I want you to follow me too
If you think that I'm kidding around, you'll just end up hurt, understood?
Painting my nails red and wearing a cheap ring
Every time I get hurt, I get new earrings

Snuggle me, I have a black hole inside of me
You're the only one who can make it disappear
Aren't you the one? You know that you are
I can't control myself anymore

I want to die from all of my regrets
Which do I have more of, self-pity or pleasure?
Make it all stop now or I'll end up going crazy
Oh, please just kill me right now

What dripped from the wound is love, or ah~

I want to die from all of my regrets
Which do I have more of, self-pity or pleasure?
Make it all stop now or I'll end up going crazy
Oh, please just kill me right now

Snuggle me, I have a black hole inside of me
You're the only one who can make it disappear
Aren't you the one? You know that you are
I can't control myself anymore

Your right shoulder had a purple butterfly
The corner of the room is where we used to kiss
I learned what it's like to have a broken heart
A piano echoes, trapped inside my head

Your right shoulder had a purple butterfly
The corner of the room is where we used to kiss
I learned what it's like to have a broken heart
A piano echoes, trapped inside my head

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I'd like help with scripting, so please tell me if you'd like to help. Also, inform me if you will or will not be participating.
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:44 pm

Umm... I had no idea we were an eng/jap chorus...

I don't sing in English...D: plus without hearing the song sung in English timing might be wrong so..
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Sun Oct 30, 2011 4:37 pm

I have some lyrics I made if you want to see them let me know! afro
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Sun Oct 30, 2011 6:52 pm

err can I have the link of the song in English please? ;;
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Sun Oct 30, 2011 10:09 pm

I know Razzyness has pretty amazing lyrics for this song if you want to use them Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Mon Oct 31, 2011 7:05 am

I don't usually sing in English, so can I have a link of this version? ^^"
I'll probably get the timing wrong.
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Mon Oct 31, 2011 7:18 am

This is my version (it's a few months old, so it's pretty sucky): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pm9JDAcVlvU

And here's Razzy's version sung by Anba: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E0E5Qge9wz4

Tell me which you like better. I won't feel bad if you like Razzy's version a lot better than mine, his lyrics are pretty badass. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Mon Oct 31, 2011 7:50 pm

Kioshi wrote:
This is my version (it's a few months old, so it's pretty sucky): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pm9JDAcVlvU

And here's Razzy's version sung by Anba: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E0E5Qge9wz4

Tell me which you like better. I won't feel bad if you like Razzy's version a lot better than mine, his lyrics are pretty badass. Smile

My lyrics: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QkbAxvW9weLepv9FoAe2QpjbW-Z9tsq_xtH9LPFpUb4/edit
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:37 pm

Kioshi wrote:
This is my version (it's a few months old, so it's pretty sucky): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pm9JDAcVlvU

And here's Razzy's version sung by Anba: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E0E5Qge9wz4

Tell me which you like better. I won't feel bad if you like Razzy's version a lot better than mine, his lyrics are pretty badass. Smile
I Like Razzy's better -shot- don't kill me OTL
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Mon Oct 31, 2011 10:10 pm

Nocturnal wrote:
My lyrics: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QkbAxvW9weLepv9FoAe2QpjbW-Z9tsq_xtH9LPFpUb4/edit

Could you do a cover with your lyrics? Just so I can see how they fit.

Sai wrote:
I Like Razzy's better -shot- don't kill me OTL

Haha, don't worry, I won't kill ya. XP
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Tue Nov 01, 2011 2:08 am

Personally idk why I like Nocturnal's lyrics better XD

Razzy's lyrics was awesome as usual tho~
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Tue Nov 01, 2011 9:58 pm

Kioshi wrote:
Nocturnal wrote:
My lyrics: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QkbAxvW9weLepv9FoAe2QpjbW-Z9tsq_xtH9LPFpUb4/edit

Could you do a cover with your lyrics? Just so I can see how they fit

Yeah I will I am going to post on AudioSpectrumChorus later after I mix.
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Thu Nov 03, 2011 6:25 pm

Nocturnal wrote:
Kioshi wrote:
Nocturnal wrote:
My lyrics: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QkbAxvW9weLepv9FoAe2QpjbW-Z9tsq_xtH9LPFpUb4/edit

Could you do a cover with your lyrics? Just so I can see how they fit

Yeah I will I am going to post on AudioSpectrumChorus later after I mix.

All right. I'll be looking forward to it! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Sun Nov 06, 2011 5:41 pm

Are we singing in english? I'm a whole lot better at singing in Japanese D: but it's okay if we are...
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:17 pm

Riruka-chan~! wrote:
Are we singing in english? I'm a whole lot better at singing in Japanese D: but it's okay if we are...
Yes were singing in English sorry :/
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PostSubject: Oh Man.....   Mon Nov 07, 2011 10:12 pm

So we have to sing the WHOLE thing?
Goodness gracious......
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Tue Nov 08, 2011 2:48 pm

I am not the best at singing in English either.
; A ;

And I am always critical when it comes to English lyrics of a japanese song, because they never flow nicely to me.

I wrote these possible lyrics:

Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched,
Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight,
Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two,
Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.

Won't you pretend you care for a while? It'll help me sleep easy, in nights where I am stressed.
First impressions may seem to make a mark, but love at first sight never seems to find me.
Don't you ask me where I feel good, though I may be intrigued, you won't get the answer you want.
Only one night was all that it took, to leave me in an insane state of panic.

But lets overlook that, and put on my coloured eyeliner,
And with my glossed lips, I'll take your breath away~!

Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched,
Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight,
Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two,
Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.

Every year the cold seasons make me blue, when I'm standing outside just waiting for you,
And the rain made my hair wet and cold, the good money I spent going down the drain.
All this time that I have spent chasing you, when I should be the one being chased around by you,
I'm not joking, it seems a bit unfair. If you found that bit funny, you can go to hell!

Cover my nails a new coat of blood-red nail varnish,
And when my heart is broken, by a brand new ring.

Come and embrace me, I feel hollow inside.
You're the only one that knows just how to make me smile,
Seems so childish, but I think that you're the one,
My prince charming? But that's so stupid!!

I could just die, from the way that I feel,
But I can't decide which I like more, self-pity or making love? Oh!
I can't take much more, I'm begging on my knees,
If you love me so, then won't you kill me please?!

I have a gaping wound and only love will fill it,
The love is leaking though, or maybe it's just---!

I could just die, from the way that I feel,
But I can't decide which I like more, self-pity or making love? Oh!
I can't take much more, I'm begging on my knees,
If you love me so, then won't you kill me please?!

Come and embrace me, I feel hollow inside.
You're the only one that knows just how to make me smile,
Seems so childish, but I think that you're the one,
My prince charming? But that's so stupid!!


Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched,
Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight,
Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two,
Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.

Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched,
Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight,
Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two,
Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.

---Just a suggestion.

I can do an example cover, if it will help.
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Tue Nov 08, 2011 5:59 pm

KyoriTsuki wrote:
So we have to sing the WHOLE thing?
Goodness gracious......

The song will be scripted once we figure out which lyrics everyone likes the best. I'll put a poll up once I hear Nocturnal's and • w •'s versions of the song.

• w • wrote:
I am not the best at singing in English either.
; A ;

And I am always critical when it comes to English lyrics of a japanese song, because they never flow nicely to me.

I wrote these possible lyrics:

Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched,
Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight,
Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two,
Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.

Won't you pretend you care for a while? It'll help me sleep easy, in nights where I am stressed.
First impressions may seem to make a mark, but love at first sight never seems to find me.
Don't you ask me where I feel good, though I may be intrigued, you won't get the answer you want.
Only one night was all that it took, to leave me in an insane state of panic.

But lets overlook that, and put on my coloured eyeliner,
And with my glossed lips, I'll take your breath away~!

Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched,
Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight,
Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two,
Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.

Every year the cold seasons make me blue, when I'm standing outside just waiting for you,
And the rain made my hair wet and cold, the good money I spent going down the drain.
All this time that I have spent chasing you, when I should be the one being chased around by you,
I'm not joking, it seems a bit unfair. If you found that bit funny, you can go to hell!

Cover my nails a new coat of blood-red nail varnish,
And when my heart is broken, by a brand new ring.

Come and embrace me, I feel hollow inside.
You're the only one that knows just how to make me smile,
Seems so childish, but I think that you're the one,
My prince charming? But that's so stupid!!

I could just die, from the way that I feel,
But I can't decide which I like more, self-pity or making love? Oh!
I can't take much more, I'm begging on my knees,
If you love me so, then won't you kill me please?!

I have a gaping wound and only love will fill it,
The love is leaking though, or maybe it's just---!

I could just die, from the way that I feel,
But I can't decide which I like more, self-pity or making love? Oh!
I can't take much more, I'm begging on my knees,
If you love me so, then won't you kill me please?!

Come and embrace me, I feel hollow inside.
You're the only one that knows just how to make me smile,
Seems so childish, but I think that you're the one,
My prince charming? But that's so stupid!!


Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched,
Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight,
Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two,
Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.

Your right shoulder, is where a butterfly was perched,
Take me to that room, where you can kiss and hold me tight,
Though there's still a pain, where my heart had split in two,
Don't remind me now, the beat just feels so good.

---Just a suggestion.

I can do an example cover, if it will help.

That would help a lot Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Tue Nov 15, 2011 7:08 pm

Sorry, is this still open? Cause I'd like to participate... lol, I dun check forums a lot, i'm sorry
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Wed Nov 16, 2011 7:44 pm

Uh =A= I...don't really sing in English ;_;
I might have to sit out of this chorus if it's gonna be in English ._.
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Wed Nov 16, 2011 11:44 pm

I'll do this. However, I notice alot of the members are having issues with timing... Also, the part that is remixed (Ha-ha-haruki nante), where does that fit in on the English words?
I can help with Scripting if needed, and I see... I might have to Genderbend for this one..
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Thu Nov 17, 2011 8:32 pm

Also, I've got some ideas for this. So we all sound blended, maybe one record their vocals, and someone uses their vocals to sing with, and so that way everyone has a guide to sing with, since the english lyrics are a little harder to sing then the Japanese one.
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Thu Nov 17, 2011 9:22 pm

I'll participate *is probably late a @#$k *
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Thu Nov 17, 2011 11:07 pm

I want to participate (if it wasn't clear) :0
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PostSubject: Re: Our First Song   Sat Nov 19, 2011 3:28 pm

Kaoru0423Akashi wrote:
Uh =A= I...don't really sing in English ;_;
I might have to sit out of this chorus if it's gonna be in English ._.

That's exactly my reaction
; A ;

My voice sounds awful in English.
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